Renu, a lady of 28 years is a teacher at a government school. Her interests in academics led her to pursue PhD. She is a girl who rules her own life with a decent dominance of her existence. Renu 's parents are aging and they are reluctant to make her get married. Renu the charming girl, who mixes up with every possible decent human being is a lonely girl deep down. She finds every human relation is complicated and this is the reason she doesn't want to extend her family. But being a teacher she loves to give a nurtured upbringing to the new generation. Unlike her parents she had no desire to marry anybody.
It's around 12O'clock at night Renu had thoughts passing down through her unconscious mind, that she could observe through her consciousness. Tomorrow a family is coming with their son to visit Renu and her family at their place so that they could have a talk regarding marriage. Renu felt drowsy and tired ar her study table. She had no idea she started dosing off. Now, the unconscious self starts its game. A dream started to manifest within her mind. She finds herself a mother of a young boy. The boy whom she has groomed in her own way. In her dream she finds instances where the boy speaks up for equality for real and discards male chauvinism. In their little home she cooks and the boy wash the dishes and clean the house by dusting and sweeping. This boy is someone who voices neither for men nor for women but for mankind. He finds mystery in every human, being a keen observer of everything. He is his mother's strength and weakness at the same time. He breaks the patriarchal rules and cries whenever he is in pain. He loves and respects the diversity that nature has created in terms of gender. He has many questions to throw to this society where both male and female are involved but only females are blamed, as in case of sexual abuse, divorce cases, being polyamorous, having extramarital affair and many more. An open minded gentleman overall, whom Renu had groomed with her own hands over years She is proud of her son at times. A man with the rarest thought process and outlook towards this modern world, where modern patriarchy, till date holds the fact that virginity is a woman's touchstone in modern patriarchal society.
You have written a true scenario of today's world where many women find themselves very insecure to get into a relationship because of patriarchal domination.
ReplyDeleteI feel that Renu thinks of that perfect man with whom she can live her rest of the life in her subconscious mind and as a result her perfect life partner is manifested in real life .So the boy who is the son in her dream and the man come to meet her family both are same person but in her dream the relationship is different as she is not certain about her marriage.
I really love this interpretation of yours 😊.....May be Renu always had an image of a perfect male figure in her unconscious mind, being a teacher her passion for giving a nurtured upbringing to the young generation manifested the dream's man as her son and coincidentally may be she found that perfect one in real life who might become her husband 😊but the conclusive part is upto my readers.😊
DeleteThank you 😊 I really like your writing style and approach.
DeleteBeautiful story.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much 😊....I would be glad to know my reader's response 😊
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